Precisely At Dusk by AE Donnelly is a juicy hot niblet of delicious. In just 15 pages, readers are drawn into what is sure to be an intensely erotic relationship between this Dom and his new submissive. It
has all the elements necessary to make it a credible D/s story. The depth of the writing conveys a sense of angst that made me squirm; descriptions of the submissive making those final decisions to submit… biting her bottom lip, her chest rising and falling, turning down her eyes, wetting her lips... were intense. The rich illustrative writing places the reader into the story. It has such a strong pull – and is so short a story – that readers need to sit down and read this in one sitting.
Precisely at Dusk
is written in first person. Normally I'm not a fan of this style narrative but it was the perfect choice for this story. Written from the Dom’s perspective, the reader will nearly feel as if they are the sub to this masterful, calm and deliberate Dom. And with some of his simple one line commands, readers’ toes will curl. It is superbly done so I say “Read this” but beware, it may leave you screaming "more, more, more."
RATING: 5 Double-Dipped Luscious Chocolate Strawberries.This review was originally written for The Romance Reviews and can be found, along with some of my other reviews, at: http://erotic.theromancereviews.com/viewbooksreview.php?bookid=2812.